Today we were doing a free write with the words below.
- Narnia
- Jack
- Jacob
- Death Star
- Glock
The Story Of Jack Russell
One bright sunny day in Narnia, Jack Russell was walking to school as per usual when he heard a glock being fired. He turned around and a bullet hit him in the leg, net thing he knew he was in hospital with a sharp pain in his leg. He looked down and just saw his plain white sheets. Just then a nurse came into his room sounding happy. "Um, Nurse" asked Jack cursorily "just call me Jacob" said Jacob. "o-okay" replied Jack "Good, what would you like for dinner master Jack?" asked Jacob "Wh-what can I have?" replied Jack "Anything from this list" answered Jacob. Jacob handed Jack the list and Jack read it aloud.
Hey Adriana its Millie and I Really liked your story. I think it would be a better bit if it was longer but overall it is a good story.The menu is interesting.
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